Jebbal's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mario bro's Metal song]

eep

It's pretty cool, and you got the notes down very well, but I agree with the last reviewer. It's a good sounding song and all, but it doesn't sound much like a real guitar. I think you'd be better off sticking to the sort of stuff that you made before. The guitar sound would be good in other songs, though... just not by itself.

I DID enjoy this one though, and I think it's cool that you're doing all this on a keyboard. You're not editing it at all on the computer? You actually play all your songs yourself just with your fingers? That's pretty sweet if you are. ;D

blue-solitude responds:

thanx again for the imput and yes all songs I create are played on piano/keyboard live and unedited with yes using all my fingers lol

[Zelda's forest song]

yaba daba doo!

This song is cool! I like it. =) There was a second or two near the beginning when my speakers couldn't handle it, though, but they were fine for the rest of the song.

You should make more stuff like this! Especially remixes of Zelda songs. I love the music in Zelda!

What program did you use to make this? FL Studio?

blue-solitude responds:

Hi soo glad you enjoyed my music ^_^ and no I don't use any software to create these songs except for a Casio Keyboard hooked up to my computer via the line-in plug-in on the side of my laptop lol! so it's all unedited versions of my work in raw format str8 from my keyboard using only a wave recorder and converting it to mp3 for you guys to listen

[So DEEP (ddr)]

wasUMiGOdo?

Probably your best song yet. =)

It sounded a lot like the real thing, and I'm a DDR fanatic, so I've got the song down in my mind pretty well. It probably would have been MORE like the original, though, if there were a stronger beat and stronger background. Putting an echo on the lead part would have sounded cool too; I think there's a little bit of that in the real song. I'm pretty sure there was a constant synthy sound in the actual song, also.

Although still pretty good, there just wasn't a lot of feeling to the song. It was a bit dull compared to the real So Deep.

Now, I know that my review was almost entirely negative, but I really did like it. Like I said, it's probably your best song so far, and you did a great job on it. =D

BTW, did you get DDR Extreme 2? If so, what do you think of it? I think it's sweet!! =)

MarioMusicMaker3 responds:

for ps2! and yes i do like it alot. the ones at the arcade are 7 th mix and unlimited witch is better than all of them!

[March of the damned]

cool beans

This really didn't seem artificial to me at all. It doesn't sound as though you were listening to it live I guess, though. It sounds more like it would after being recorded for a CD or something.

There is a good variety of sounds, and they are all easily distinguished from one another. Everything sounds great and goes together to form an epic, memorable song.

Although I don't think this is your best, it is still very well done and definetely good for more listens in the future.

I'm going to go with Shawn on that last part. God job! XD

XGM-Zeth responds:

I thank thee, Jebbal.
I agree with it not being my best, but my best music isn't even on NG.

[Barrels of Fun--_--]

randisirrpl

This song is awesome! It has a great sound and just seems really solid. You should be getting more recognition for a lot of the stuff you're making dude!

And how about "The Happy Pineapple" for a stupider name? Eh? Pretty stupid...

Nice Job!

PERVOK responds:

:P:P
Nice name lol

and thanks for the review!
(the happy pineapple...i like)

[aroundtheworld(daftPUNK)]

kachhhaaoisiuu

I'm not a big fan of this one, as it got a kind of annoying and repetitive after a while. The percussion sounded cool, though, and I liked the mechanical feeling it gave to the song.

I don't think I've ever heard the original song, so I don't know how good you did remaking it. Hopefully that's the case, or that means that I can't tell what song you were remaking from listening to it... XD

Maybe a constant, long held out bass would help, or some added effects to the sounds that are already in the song to make it more interesting.

Overall, it's a decent song, and I can tell that you put some effort into it. =)

I wrote a review for your song, "2 much base 4 u !!", by the way. Take a look at it if you want to read a more positive review!! =D
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AND HERE'S YOUR PEANUT BUTTER AND MARSHMALLOW FLUFF SANDWICH!!!

MarioMusicMaker3 responds:

^^

ty 4 evew. pb sandwich and coco!

[2 much base 4 u !!]

my favorite food is a peanut butter!

Crack foo' gangsta!!

This is one of the catchiest songs I've heard on here. You actually got me to PUMP UP DA VOLUME!!
I can definetely see this song being on the main menu of a game or something. There's really not much I can say bad about it. The ending was a little sudden, but that's pretty much it. I guess what mostly kept this from getting a higher rating was the fact that it's pretty much just a drum beat, rather than a song.... hope you know what I mean. Good job!!

We're almost even with the food and drinks. Keep em' comin'!!

MarioMusicMaker3 responds:

well well well. i hope u didnt eat ne thing for the last 5 days cuz u get,,,,

999 cakes, and 9999999 jars of pnut butter and some toast!!!!!

[SANDSTORM(trippymix)]

pop goes that bonobo

I TOLD YOU I'D REVIEW SOME OF YOUR SONGS! It just took me a month!

This is pretty cool! You got the notes right I think, and it's nice and long! Cool sounds too! There was just one thing that was bad, which is how on the heavier parts of the song it starts crackling. It sounds like Ducshhh! Tuh! Tuh! TUSHHSSHHSHCCCSHHSSHSHSHSHCHSHSH!!!! Pop! Pop! POP! BOOM!!! Kaboom!!

Besides that, I liked it! Now give me something to eat and drink! You owe me! =)

MarioMusicMaker3 responds:

THANKS FOR THE HONEST REVEW! in fact honest enught to not be offencive but also give constructive criticiciom. my review of ur revew is .....
brownie, chocolat milk, cookies,5 cakes, and a bottle of fago! thanks!

[§Zeth§ Forest Theme]

=DD

Hey dude! I don't know if you remember or not, but you reviewed one of my songs a while back. I finally decided to check some of your stuff out. =)

This song is so good! I used to play Mario RPG all the time, and sometimes I'd just goto the forest level to listen to the music. You are amazing for making this!! =D

XGM-Zeth responds:

I didnt remember it until I heard the song; Hows it going btw ? Any new songs?

Well; Thank you for the review and votes (if you voted), I've been wanting to remix for a while; and with this and the castlevania song I actually begun.

Gotten FL yet btw?
Now, Have milk and cookies (bwahha)

-Zeth

[KFNX - S.D.D (S-5 RMX)]

nice

Another great song from you. =)
I liked this one a lot. Very good job with the percussion. It sounded as good as Paragon's percussion in his songs! This whole song sounds a lot like a song that Paragon would make actually... same quality of work in my opinion. It also has a certain feeling to it that I only get from Paragon's songs... If Paragon submitted this I'd believe it was by him.

Now whenever a new song comes out from you, it's just like a new song coming out by Paragon to me. The only difference is that you don't get 200 downloads in like 4 days. lol.

The point is that you are really good at making music and I'm getting more and more excited whenever I see a new song by you in the portal. Just like I get when I see a new song by Paragon. I can tell that there will be lots of great songs from you in the future. =)

(Sorry if it was a little confusing the way I wrote that. It doesn't seem very well written to me. =/ )

Anyways...
Great job!

PS
This is a remix right? Cause that's why I gave you a 4 for originality. If it's not then sorry about that. XD

KFNX responds:

ahhahaha .hmm does this mean that i am the next paragon? Lol jk..
Hahaha originality a 4? omg lol
you gotta hear the original song
it's verydifferent from this one lol XD

thank you for your review =D
KFNX likes you!

~`KFNX`~