hey who lives in there
Over the river and through the wood. We come to a place my father once stood. Thirty degrees east, one hundred north, it's the thought that counts. While we're discussing that, I'll go off in a whole new direction. What've you got here? Sounds like a song. Its an audio track, I was half right. Let's break it down:
The song starts with an intro. Using an intro is okay, but you need to be careful. I think you pulled it off decently here. You might not be so lucky next time, though. I suggest you blast right into the main melody full force for future projects - Intros are just too risky.
After the intro comes a powerful beat. You have to be more cautious when it comes to the powerful beat, DjSc00p. You did a pretty good job here, but I recommend you stick with little/no beat at all for future productions. Think like the consumer for a second (Pretend that NG music costs money). Ask youself, "Do I want any of these songs to have a powerful beat? Should I download this one or that one? This one's got a powerful beat, its out of the question." That last sentence was a statement, don't ask yourself a statement. Its just what the average person would have said.
Well so far so good. Closely following the powerful beat is something I can't describe. It's an all out breakdown where everything you've grown to know and love just flat out stops. I honestly don't know what you were thinking here. How could you have known that this would work out? Was it just your lucky day? Whatever it was, it kept the song moving along quite nicely and gives the listener a chance to relax for a few moments. What a crazy idea.
Skipping ahead a bit, we come to the ending. I was kind of surprised because most good songs don't end. You were feeling extremely ambitious I see. I like you're style, DjSc00p! Always taking risks. Its as if you knew that people wouldn't want the song to go on for the rest of their days. Gee whiz.
Speaking of endings, its time for this review to come to one of its own. I had a lot of good times writing this, and I'm very sad to say that I must move on in my life. There are just other things to do. I hope you understand. Nice job on this, and keep up the good work! ;)